(I tried to find an image for Foot-in-Mouth Disease, but it just didn't work out.)
Sometimes we
mean well but manage to do or say the wrong thing. I’m a frequent offender. No,
this isn’t a confession and, yes, it does have to do with writing.
In real life
we often receive unexpected results when we offer a compliment. Let’s say you
run into an acquaintance at the grocery store and she’s got a new haircut. You
say, “I love your new hair style. Cute dress, too.”
The
acquaintance might have any number of reactions, including:
“Waddaya mean
by that?”
Or
“I hate my hair
and my dress doesn’t fit right. I hate my life. I hate everything.”
Or
“Who invited you to join the Fashion Police?”
With any luck
you might have caught her on a good day and she’ll say, “Why, thank you,” as
she pats her hair and smooths out her dress.
Of course,
sometimes we say things and for some unknown reason the words come out of our
mouths sounding differently than we intended.
I might say, “Who
the heck does your hair?” meaning, I like your new style and I want to make an
appointment. Unfortunately, it sounded like, “Tell me who does your hair and I’ll
avoid her at all costs.”
In the Sandi
Webster series she has a partner (now husband) named Peter Goldberg. Pete is
100% Italian and not Jewish, but the story behind the name will be covered in a
future book. Initially, Sandi made an appointment to meet with Pete at a
restaurant because she needed help in her agency. When Pete stepped up to the
table where Sandi was waiting and introduced himself, one of the first things
she said was, “You certainly don’t look like a Goldberg.” Foot-in-Mouth Disease
at its finest.
Unperturbed,
Pete asked her what a Goldberg should look like. That was the beginning of a
long partnership, friendship and romance.
I’ve lived an
interesting life and have plenty of interesting stories. When someone tells me
a story, I often find myself reminded of an event from my own life and tell
said tale. No, I’m not trying to “one up” the other person – I just love
telling stories. It’s one of the reasons I became a writer. It also doesn’t
mean I’m a know-it-all. Again, I just enjoy telling stories.
How does all
of this relate to writing? The story about Sandi and Pete meeting is a good example.
People often say or do things without thinking first. It’s human nature – and it’s
honest. Our fictional characters need to be honest, too. I’ve read books where
the main characters were so perfect that I ended up putting the book down. They
come across as super-human and one-dimensional. Let your characters step on a
few toes. Sometimes in a mystery that’s what makes the other person blurt out
information the protagonist wouldn’t have found out otherwise.
I’ve often
put my foot in my mouth, and anyone who knows me can verify my affliction. I’ve
been known to backpedal when my comment hadn’t been intended as offensive. I‘ve
often offered unwanted advice, but I meant well. Just ask my daughter. No
excuse, but that’s me. And sometimes it’s Sandi.
Chris Cross,
from the Bogey Man series, often emulates Humphrey Bogart. I suppose he can be
annoying, but if you’re going to mimic someone you might as well do it up
right. His wife, Pamela, doesn’t seem to mind, and in his mind her opinion is
the important one.
What all this
boils down to is make your characters real. Let your readers relate to them.
Let them have foot-in-mouth disease or let them be clumsy, but keep them
down-to-earth. Just don’t make them obnoxious. There’s realistic, but there’s
also the Ick Factor to be considered.
Don’t overdo or exaggerate the realism with the exception of working toward
humor.
Have you ever
put your foot in your mouth? Have you ever been on the other side and taken
offense when none was intended?
Until next time,
relax and enjoy life. Sometimes a comment is just a comment and there’s no
hidden agenda – unless you’re a fictional character and then all bets are off.
Prudy’s Back! – A Sandi
Webster Mystery
will soon be available as an audio book.
