Monday, September 24, 2018

A Brief Moment



A brief moment can change our lives, much as a brief moment can change the lives of characters in books.

You’ve probably heard stories about someone who was caught in a traffic jam and missed a plane, only to find out later that the plane crashed. I have a friend whose mother got up during the night to get a drink of water during a heavy wind and rain storm. Her husband got up to see if she was okay. While they were in the kitchen a tree fell, crashing through the roof and landing on their bed.

True stories, and yet if you read them in a book you might think they’re not realistic. Strange things happen, and they can change our lives. You know the old saying about truth being stranger than fiction.

I remind myself of these things when I’m writing. If I want the characters’ lives to be realistic, then I need to remember that circumstances can change the outcome of a story, even if that circumstance only lasts for a brief moment.

Timing can be everything. What if Jane Doe hadn’t bent over to pick up the olive she dropped on the floor in the kitchen? The killer hiding outside her window would have fired his gun and hit her. However, since she did bend over, the bullet would have missed her and rammed harmlessly through a wall. What if Jane had been heading for the airport I mentioned above? She could have been on the plane that crashed.

I dropped my comb one morning while doing my hair and found a favorite earring I’d lost. I never would have found it if I hadn’t dropped my comb. It had landed in an odd spot. Many years ago I had an expensive piece of jewelry sitting on my dresser. It sat there for three weeks. One morning I was about to leave for work when I suddenly decided I should hide it, and I did. That day, while I was at work, someone burglarized my home, but they didn’t find that piece of jewelry. True story.

On her way to town, Minnie decided to take a new route to the store and missed a major accident. She couldn’t tell you why she changed her normal routine and route.

Yes, Virginia, coincidences do happen, probably more often than we might think. A brief moment can change the course of a person’s life, a sudden thirst during a storm might save a life, and dropping on object might lead you to find a lost treasure.

I know someone who was working on her genealogy. She came from a good, fine, upstanding family and was quite surprised to find out her ancestors were thieves and killers. Fortunately, she had a great sense of humor and found the light side to her discoveries. The fact that they were in the distant past certainly helped.

There are so many things that happen in real life that can be used in stories. It’s all a matter of deciding how to present the incident as fiction. Does life imitate fiction? Or does fiction imitate life?

Sometimes we have to tread lightly. Other times the incidents in a book should be as bold as possible. This is where common sense steps in.

How do you decide what might make a good scene or idea for a story? As a reader, do you sometimes wonder if there’s any truth in the mystery you’re reading?

A number of my books have at least a modicum of truth in them. It’s up to the reader to try to guess what’s true and what’s not.

Until next week, I hope a special brief moment or coincidence visits your life and brightens your week.

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I can’t recall if I mentioned it or not, but Bubba’s Ghost – A Sandi Webster Mystery is now available in audio format.

If you haven’t read it yet, One Adventure Too Many – A Sandi Webster Mystery was recently released.

Sandi’s mother and her aunt are ready for an adventure. Unfortunately, their idea of an adventure involved a dead body and a young woman in hiding.

10 comments:

  1. So true, Marja. I once found missing money in an old jacket pocket that really came in handy at the time. My soon to be released novel, Girl on the Precipice, includes some unbelievable events from my own life that I've finally been able to share. Thanks for the good article.

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    1. Thank you, Jean, and I'm looking forward to your new book. Interesting how things manage to turn up just when we need them. Thank you so much for commenting!

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  2. Those coincidences make for great stories! I've got a couple stories (too long to share here) that would be hard to believe if I put them in a book. Have a great week, Marja!

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    1. Yes, they do, Amy. I'm a firm believer that things happen for a reason. Sometimes we have to try to build a reason to make sense in a book. Thank you so much for commenting!

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  3. I think putting characters in the wrong place at the wrong time is what makes a mystery fun to read. And yours have been in some interesting places. Not sure if any of the scenes reflect real life, but they're pretty interesting.

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    1. Yes, Evelyn, some of the scenes reflect real life, with a twist. Without adding a twist, things could become boring. : ) Thank you so much for commenting!

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  4. So true! One moment can change our characters' lives and make for an interesting mystery. I used many "real" events in my new release and a friend of mine said she had fun trying to figure out which ones really happened to me and which ones were solely a product of my imagination. Keep 'em guessing.

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    1. You obviously had fun with your new release, Secrets in Storyville. I've really enjoyed your books and until recently I hadn't thought about how many authors put real situations with a twist in their stories. I read with a whole new attitude now. Thank you so much for commenting!

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  5. So true! As always, you're right on the mark. Have a blog scheduled a couple weeks out on Writers in Residence about these kind of things and fitting them into one's plot--great minds?(smile)The happenstance of incidents is so interesting...

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    1. I can't wait to read your blog, Madeline. I hope you're right about great minds. : ) It's true that one brief moment can really change the direction our lives take. Thank you so much for commenting!

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